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		<title>Comment on Is Your WIP Developmentally Appropriate? by Hillary Homzie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hillary Homzie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Apr 2012 23:57:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Jenny, for adding Steiner&#039;s model. I thought I would also add Kohlberg&#039;s six stages of of moral development to the mix.

Level 1. Preconventional Morality

Stage 1. Obedience and Punishment Orientation. The child assumes that powerful authorities hand down a fixed set of rules which he or she must unquestioningly obey. Kohlberg calls stage 1 thinking &quot;preconventional&quot; because children do not yet speak as members of society. Instead, they see morality as something external to themselves, as that which the grown-ups say they must do.

Stage 2. Individualism and Exchange. At this stage children recognize that there is not just one right view that is handed down by the authorities. Different individuals have different viewpoints. At stage 2, in contrast, punishment is simply a risk that one naturally wants to avoid.


Level II. Conventional Morality

Stage 3. Good Interpersonal Relationships. At this stage children--who are by now usually entering their teens--see morality as more than simple deals. They believe that people should live up to the expectations of the family and community and behave in &quot;good&quot; ways. Good behavior means having good motives and interpersonal feelings such as love, empathy, trust, and concern for others. 

Stage 4. Maintaining the Social Order. Stage 3 reasoning works best in two-person relationships with family members or close friends, where one can make a real effort to get to know the other&#039;s feelings and needs and try to help. At stage 4, in contrast, the respondent becomes more broadly concerned with society as a whole. Now the emphasis is on obeying laws, respecting authority, and performing one&#039;s duties so that the social order is maintained. 

Level III. Postconventional Morality

Stage 5. Social Contract and Individual Rights. At stage 4, people want to keep society functioning. However, a smoothly functioning society is not necessarily a good one. A totalitarian society might be well-organized, but it is hardly the moral ideal. At stage 5, people begin to ask, &quot;What makes for a good society?&quot; They begin to think about society in a very theoretical way, stepping back from their own society and considering the rights and values that a society ought to uphold. 

Stage 5 respondents basically believe that a good society is best conceived as a social contract into which people freely enter to work toward the benefit of all They recognize that different social groups within a society will have different values, but they believe that all rational people would agree on two points. First they would all want certain basic rights, such as liberty and life, to be protected Second, they would want some democratic procedures for changing unfair law and for improving society.

Stage 6: Universal Principles. Stage 5 respondents are working toward a conception of the good society. They suggest that we need to (a) protect certain individual rights and (b) settle disputes through democratic processes. However, democratic processes alone do not always result in outcomes that we intuitively sense are just. A majority, for example, may vote for a law that hinders a minority. Thus, Kohlberg believes that there must be a higher stage--stage 6--which defines the principles by which we achieve justice.

This was adapted and shortened from an article in Theories of Development. To see the full article go to http://faculty.plts.edu/gpence/html/kohlberg.htm</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Jenny, for adding Steiner&#8217;s model. I thought I would also add Kohlberg&#8217;s six stages of of moral development to the mix.</p>
<p>Level 1. Preconventional Morality</p>
<p>Stage 1. Obedience and Punishment Orientation. The child assumes that powerful authorities hand down a fixed set of rules which he or she must unquestioningly obey. Kohlberg calls stage 1 thinking &#8220;preconventional&#8221; because children do not yet speak as members of society. Instead, they see morality as something external to themselves, as that which the grown-ups say they must do.</p>
<p>Stage 2. Individualism and Exchange. At this stage children recognize that there is not just one right view that is handed down by the authorities. Different individuals have different viewpoints. At stage 2, in contrast, punishment is simply a risk that one naturally wants to avoid.</p>
<p>Level II. Conventional Morality</p>
<p>Stage 3. Good Interpersonal Relationships. At this stage children&#8211;who are by now usually entering their teens&#8211;see morality as more than simple deals. They believe that people should live up to the expectations of the family and community and behave in &#8220;good&#8221; ways. Good behavior means having good motives and interpersonal feelings such as love, empathy, trust, and concern for others. </p>
<p>Stage 4. Maintaining the Social Order. Stage 3 reasoning works best in two-person relationships with family members or close friends, where one can make a real effort to get to know the other&#8217;s feelings and needs and try to help. At stage 4, in contrast, the respondent becomes more broadly concerned with society as a whole. Now the emphasis is on obeying laws, respecting authority, and performing one&#8217;s duties so that the social order is maintained. </p>
<p>Level III. Postconventional Morality</p>
<p>Stage 5. Social Contract and Individual Rights. At stage 4, people want to keep society functioning. However, a smoothly functioning society is not necessarily a good one. A totalitarian society might be well-organized, but it is hardly the moral ideal. At stage 5, people begin to ask, &#8220;What makes for a good society?&#8221; They begin to think about society in a very theoretical way, stepping back from their own society and considering the rights and values that a society ought to uphold. </p>
<p>Stage 5 respondents basically believe that a good society is best conceived as a social contract into which people freely enter to work toward the benefit of all They recognize that different social groups within a society will have different values, but they believe that all rational people would agree on two points. First they would all want certain basic rights, such as liberty and life, to be protected Second, they would want some democratic procedures for changing unfair law and for improving society.</p>
<p>Stage 6: Universal Principles. Stage 5 respondents are working toward a conception of the good society. They suggest that we need to (a) protect certain individual rights and (b) settle disputes through democratic processes. However, democratic processes alone do not always result in outcomes that we intuitively sense are just. A majority, for example, may vote for a law that hinders a minority. Thus, Kohlberg believes that there must be a higher stage&#8211;stage 6&#8211;which defines the principles by which we achieve justice.</p>
<p>This was adapted and shortened from an article in Theories of Development. To see the full article go to <a href="http://faculty.plts.edu/gpence/html/kohlberg.htm" rel="nofollow">http://faculty.plts.edu/gpence/html/kohlberg.htm</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on Is Your WIP Developmentally Appropriate? by Jenny Pessereau</title>
		<link>http://hillaryhomzie.com/2012/04/is-your-wip-developmentally-appropriate/#comment-645</link>
		<dc:creator>Jenny Pessereau</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Apr 2012 23:31:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the valuable advice.  I&#039;ve been debating the age of my middle grade main character based on the genre (time travel/fantasy), the point of view (3rd person) and central theme (self-acceptance and family).  Still working on that one.

While not as widely referenced as Piaget, Steiner&#039;s Model of the Child is interesting.  He divided childhood into three stages that correspond to the developmental levels of the child:  0-7, the body; 7-14, the heart and feelings; 14-21, the intellect.   Adolescent attitudes have reached down into preteen years in our day and girls often mature earlier than they did in the 19th century, but humans develop pretty much at the same rate.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the valuable advice.  I&#8217;ve been debating the age of my middle grade main character based on the genre (time travel/fantasy), the point of view (3rd person) and central theme (self-acceptance and family).  Still working on that one.</p>
<p>While not as widely referenced as Piaget, Steiner&#8217;s Model of the Child is interesting.  He divided childhood into three stages that correspond to the developmental levels of the child:  0-7, the body; 7-14, the heart and feelings; 14-21, the intellect.   Adolescent attitudes have reached down into preteen years in our day and girls often mature earlier than they did in the 19th century, but humans develop pretty much at the same rate.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Should You Write Through to the End? by Hillary</title>
		<link>http://hillaryhomzie.com/2012/03/should-you-write-through-to-the-end/#comment-565</link>
		<dc:creator>Hillary</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2012 13:16:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, Margaret, it&#039;s so easy to forget to move forward :) I&#039;m doing some early morning writing and my temptation is always to mess with some earlier pages, but it feels so good to forge ahead. But of course, eventually, I&#039;ll need to go back and revise. But that&#039;s for another day. And of course, I&#039;ll have to blog about revising!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, Margaret, it&#8217;s so easy to forget to move forward <img src='http://hillaryhomzie.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  I&#8217;m doing some early morning writing and my temptation is always to mess with some earlier pages, but it feels so good to forge ahead. But of course, eventually, I&#8217;ll need to go back and revise. But that&#8217;s for another day. And of course, I&#8217;ll have to blog about revising!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Should You Write Through to the End? by Margaret Orto</title>
		<link>http://hillaryhomzie.com/2012/03/should-you-write-through-to-the-end/#comment-564</link>
		<dc:creator>Margaret Orto</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2012 13:03:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Hillary,
Thanks, I needed to hear this too! 
Margaret</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Hillary,<br />
Thanks, I needed to hear this too!<br />
Margaret</p>
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		<title>Comment on Should You Write Through to the End? by Hillary</title>
		<link>http://hillaryhomzie.com/2012/03/should-you-write-through-to-the-end/#comment-561</link>
		<dc:creator>Hillary</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2012 04:31:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Victoria,
I&#039;m glad that you got what you needed today! I needed it myself :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Victoria,<br />
I&#8217;m glad that you got what you needed today! I needed it myself <img src='http://hillaryhomzie.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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